Suddath, Claire. "How the Internet Made Justin Bieber a Star." Time. Time and CNN, 17 May 2011. Web. 26 Jan. 2011.
Original:
"But beyond his looks and talent, Bieber is something else entirely: the first real teen idol of the digital age, a star whose fame can be attributed entirely to the Internet."
In-text Citation:
The biggest factor in Bieber's uniqueness is the fact that he is "the first real teen idol of the digital age, a star whose fame can be attributed entirely to the Internet" (Suddath 1).
you did a great job of paraphrasing with the word "uniqueness" to describe the "something else entirely." also, your in-text citation looks perfect. i think you might need a comma after the word "is" and before "the." but i'm not 100% sure!
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