Her childish tendencies also stretch as far as filling her sentences with “eyes-drifting-into-future-space” pauses that lead into another fit of giggles (Tyrangiel 1).
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Then there are the pauses--earnest, eyes-drifting-into-future-space jobs that can stretch 10 or 15 seconds. Thus a typical Beyonce sentence does, "As far as acting ... I want to ... hmm ... play some kind of a ... like a ... a dark character? Even though ... no ... I don't know!" Then: "Aaah-hah-hah-hah--hah. Lord!"
MLA Citation:
Tyrangiel, Josh. “Destiny’s Adult.” Time. CNN, 30 June 2003. Web. 27 Jan. 2011.
good work Ellen, looks good to me! You did a nice job of making your quote flow with your words.
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