A few weeks ago, UFC president Dana White and CEO Lorenzo Fertitta announced hall of fame fighter Chuck Liddell’s retirement from fighting in the octagon. White and Fertitta “made the announcement because Liddell couldn’t,” (1).
Original text:
"At a pre-UFC 125 news conference a couple of weeks ago, company president Dana White and CEO Lorenzo Fertitta announced that Liddell is done. They made the announcement because Liddell couldn't."
Source:
Wagenheim, Jeff. “Chuck Liddell discusses retirement, post-career job as UFC veep.” SI.com.
January 11, 2011. Web. January 26, 2011.
You did a good job integrating the quote with relevant information to make it flow. The only thing I think you could change is that you don't need the comma at the end for MLA, i.e. ...Liddell couldn't" (1).
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